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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

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0 posted 2003-06-14 05:24 AM

Do not walk the moor near 'courting wall corner',
for the woman in black walks there.

The anguished soul of her mourning,murdered by one of two lovers,lost forever,shaking her jet hair.

Elope with one lover,but tell not the other and live forever together.

But cut down in your prime,by your jilted lover and buried on the bare moor under the heather.

Now you hurt and haunt Middleham Moor,your soul full of anguish.
A dark spectral shape seen by many in soft mist,
before into thin air...you vanish..!

(based on a true story and published in an anthology of similar poetry.)(Goldenrose.)

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-06-14 05:32 AM

spooky

Suetang
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since 2001-03-07

Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

2 posted 2003-06-14 06:26 PM

A dark yet brilliant picture was painted through your words. I really enjoyed this.

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

3 posted 2003-06-14 06:30 PM

i find this a very fabulous write of poetry and factual makes it more so,,,,

QjQ

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-06-14 06:51 PM

Effective, chilling writing!

Goosebumps are rising upon mine flesh as I maketh mine reply!

Thanks for the thrilling read!

Warm hugs,
EA

Black Swan
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since 2003-02-05

Posts 165
on the moon

5 posted 2003-06-14 06:54 PM

hehe if I was in England I would go there, chasing ghosts is how I get my kicks,there are a few infamous spots in my home town that are said to be haunted.
Loved this write!!!
~Talia

BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

6 posted 2003-06-14 06:55 PM

cut down in your prime,by your jilted lover and buried on the bare moor under the heather.

Those lines are hard to recover from.
Nice presentation in the dark Goldenrose~

So sadly when writing the truth~

Foxyoasis
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since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

7 posted 2003-06-14 06:57 PM

very good,i had chills going down my spine!

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

8 posted 2003-06-15 02:17 AM

I do prefer the love poetry,( we can't write about love all the time can we)lol! but a good ghost story is needed from time to time to shake life up a bit!

very creative! I am scared!oooh..someone please comfort me...too scary!!!

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

9 posted 2004-02-29 01:06 AM

Nice writing...James

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