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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla 
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solitude is nice dark angels surround my side no place to hide no this is my life im used to alone by myself to die trying out the tanka form of poetry,so dont be to hard on me  heheFool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
This is different, but definately cool.  |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
welp different is good that is what i am always was,and will continue to be LoL thanks Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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exhale Senior Member
since 2003-06-13
Posts 646Alberta,Canada |
hmmm i completely agree different if definitly good  awesome poem!! |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
Heya...very cool. Don't really know the style of writting but I like it heaps. U've really put alot of thought into it and it's easy to see that. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
the style of writting is a tanka,where it has 5 lines and consits of 5-7-5-7-7 syllbles Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
solitude is nice, yes |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Solitude is nice indeed! ARCTIC WIND |
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