Open Poetry #27 |
Waiting To Be Discovered |
timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
I won't tell, of all my nights in a living hell. If you don't search, you won't find, the demons hiding in my mind. If you don't reach, you won't touch, the place that needs your love so much. If you can't see, I won't show, the place that aches each time you go. If you don't ask, I won't say, Why I'm afraid you'll go away. If you don't look, beyond my lies, you won't see the truth, In my eyes. If you can't see, I won't share, all the pain, hiding there. If you don't push, you'll never find, the damaged part, of my mind. If you hold me close, I can pretend, that this feeling I have, will never end. If you could promise to never leave, finally my heart will feel releived. If you can't, I'll never know, The love my heart, has to show. Ask me now, and I will share, this and more, that's hidden there. If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance. George Bernard Shaw [This message has been edited by timothysangel1973 (06-17-2003 01:56 PM).] |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
This is lovely - Let's take it for another round... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
And another round.... |
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visitvenus Member
since 2002-12-30
Posts 101PA, USA |
Back to the top! |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
Great poem mate. I think I'll read this one again...and again...and again. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
This is beautiful. I enjoyed the read. ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
very nice good write Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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pisumnux Junior Member
since 2003-06-11
Posts 49Troy, NY |
beautiful....i loved it and i know many who can relate If it weren't for my horse... |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
THANK YOU ALL Soooooooooo MUCH!! YOU ALL MAKE ME FEEL SO SPECIAL! THANK YOU, THANK YOU, THANK YOU!!!! Tima C. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
just a wonderful write! such pouring of yourself! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write! ARCTIC WIND |
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