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NickTofteland
Member

since 2003-06-13

Posts 74
MN, USA

0 posted 2003-06-17 07:19 PM

When Sol expires in crimson fire,
And daylight shadows flee.
When starlight weaves a tapestry,
Across an endless sea.
When moonlight filters from on high
To cast its' eerie glow,
To guide me through this darkened sphere
As on my way I go.
Then I am happy in my world,
And with myself content.
For I will cherish such a night,
Until my life is spent.

Psalms 20:7 "Some trust in chariots and some in horses, but we trust in the name of the Lord our God."

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-06-17 07:22 PM

Sweetness, what a great poem

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

2 posted 2003-06-17 07:45 PM

Great poetry Nick - Paul

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2003-06-17 07:49 PM

Nick, a very good poem with exceptional
flow. Nice write, very nice.

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-06-18 07:07 PM

When moonlight filters from on high
To cast its' eerie glow,
To guide me through this darkened sphere
As on my way I go.

The feelings you convey are lovely
as well as the view of the sea that you've painted with words.

Oh, and before I forget, nice tie Nick~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-19 02:59 AM

beautiful!

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

6 posted 2003-06-19 07:04 AM

heavenly words

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

7 posted 2003-06-19 07:48 AM

Well lookie here! Nice write there Knique....well done

El_Campeador
Senior Member

since 2003-01-29

Posts 761
Ohio, USA

8 posted 2003-06-19 08:31 AM

Your choice of words is excellent; it created a clear picture in my mind. Good write.

~El Campeador

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2008-02-23 12:06 PM

Beautifully Written!

ARCTIC WIND

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