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A Scream
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A Scream |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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One day I will scream from the depths of this emptying lungs in bittersweet release Reality will shatter tiny shards of glass suspended in the black of a universe unravelled The question hangs Will I look upon this newborn sky free or from a white room? |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
Ahh, this one I relate to  Very interesting and wonderful write. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
sometimes a good scream is very therapeutic, lovie. And other times? It just makes the neighbors look at ya funny. (You'd think I'd be used to that by now...)  |
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S Arthur Grey Senior Member
since 2001-03-19
Posts 719woven by a poet's loom |
I've always pictured screams as being red, and more vivid in your context of black and white. s.a.g. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
The question hangs Will I look upon this newborn sky free or from a white room? yes, raffi, i ask myself the same question many days, and ponder about bouncing off a rubber room some days, thinking it might be a nice change frm the insanity i sometimes live very cool ......... [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-17-2003 10:39 PM).] |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Screaming makes you feel better. I know. Enjoyed the read.Cold hands means a warm heart |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
One day I will scream from the depths of this emptying lungs in bittersweet release Me too, Raphey!! [This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-17-2003 10:57 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Raph: this is brilliant!!!! I often think I am already in a white room the sky would be a nice change of scenery . . . amazing write - as always still in awe of you scream all you want to . . . you know I know you know xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks all appreciate it |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
hey...want to sit next to me in basket weaving therapy?...h |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
sorry lmao @ Helen . . . |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
don't laugh sue...i saved you a seat too...giggle...h |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Hey? What about me? I qualify, don't I? I'm a basketcase too...pout... |
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Foxyoasis Senior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 974Atlantic Beach,Fla |
im sure anyone that is in to arts,like poetry and painting ect,has to be a few fries short of a happy meal but being not wrapped to tight makes our work very powerful nice write!Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me..... |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
yes K you too...4 bad childern...at the back of the class...well when i am not in the corner...ROFLMAO...just this time save me some red jello please!!!...h [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-18-2003 12:03 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
ooooh..there's punishment involved? laughng..well count me in! grin. Can't seem to get enough of the stuff! (and thanks for tolerating our mischief Raph! but then? perhaps we do deserve a spanking!  ) |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Helen thanks for the laugh and at least you got the corner of the class. I had to take the long lonely walk to the office so often that went back years later to visit a teacher not only did the secretary remember me but she asked if wanted to wait in my usual spot with a grin |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I like the high desert for screaming. The thin air, I think, is easier on the throat. *smile* Great writing, Sir. [This message has been edited by icebox (06-18-2003 12:15 AM).] |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
thank YOU for making me smile tonight...my love runs deep and pure and given without reservation...and it is nice to feel it back unconditionally...for even when a heart is breaking...others hold it together unafraid of the bleeding...such a great feeling...(even if we are a little on the far side of sane)...h [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (06-18-2003 12:23 AM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
ice need to find me a desert soon grin h you're way to kind to me..hugs and goodnite all |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...love the whole thread here! (and the write, of course) |
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Bec Member
since 2001-02-23
Posts 475Canberra |
hi aenimal... i guess everyone needs to have a good scream every now and then. i can totally relate to this piece. Bec "Poetry and Hums aren't things which you get, they're things which get you. And all you can do is to go where they can find you." |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I needed this this morning . . . Helen - gee thanks for blowing me in to the Feds up there . . . lmao and yes Karen would be in lockup ahahahahah I think Raph would make pretty baskets lmfao Raph - tell me about it when I was getting married you know how the RC church makes ya give your soul and all (lol) beforehand I went to the church after maybe twenty years of not being there for grammar school and was actually shaking in the truck . . . Bill was laughing (non-traditional Catholic school he went to mind you) and as I knocked on the door Fr. said, "Oh hello Susan . . . how is your mother and uncle doing? Do do do do do do do do . . . Do I hear the Twilight Zone . . . lmao - thank you xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-18-2003 08:59 AM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Wonderful! Come screaming with me on top of a mountain and the mountains all together will echo and when the silence sets in ... you are free to SOAR HIGH .....light and LIGHT! Bravo! Abbracci. Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Screaming in a pillow! That works ARCTIC WIND |
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