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Mirror, Mirror....On The Wall
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Mirror, Mirror....On The Wall |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Oh mirror damp on toilet wall Who is the one in the next stall? I need to retreat from this vapor and some fool stole my toilet paper... Oh mirror wet from splashing suds reminding of forty day’s floods Where is the jacket to float away? Mirror, oh mirror, just please say.. Oh mirror, friend and shining foe tell me right now, I wanta know. Is this small bump right here a zit? Come now mirror, I gotta git. Listen mirror, once on the wall of that stinking paperless stall. Ya gotta cut through all this chase. Was that a new zit on my face? The music rocks, the time is nigh for those fine babes to swoon and sigh. And if you don’t cut through this crap the girls will see the zit and zap! Mirror, mirror on the wet floor I gotta go Dude, time to score. The babes are waitin’, zit is hid Mirror, old friend...one more favor... change the paper....put down the lid. [This message has been edited by Magnus (06-17-2003 08:35 PM).] |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
lol, this is awesome! I love it!  |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write "mag" A voice of honesty |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
 ...MethinkZit's a day for reflection... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
lol@Nan! and this is the second poem I opened that mentioned a toilet... hmmm...y'think the universe is talkin' to me?  Thanks for the much needed smile, Mag. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Thanx Glenn and Kaoru.... Nan....ya got me giggling now....you are too much... |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (sigh) Oh Barry, this is so very original, dearest friend, LOL, I wonder how this got inspired? (big hugggsssssss) Excellent work, dearest friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Barry, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ser, Noah....thanx both of ya.... FYI, my universe speaks to me loud and clear in the AM hours.... |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL This is delightful, Barry.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sometimes...I admit I just don't know what to say...speechless! An air of youth, with just the right amount of sparty pants! TD |
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topsyturveychick Member
since 2003-01-19
Posts 57Bris,QLD,Aus |
LMAO...I can't stop laughing. This is soo cool. What made you write a poem about toliets, zits and all that jazz. It's a classic. I asked God how much he loved me... |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Barry, I have a whole new appreciation of you! Bathroom humor...we never outgrow it do we? I try to incorporate in my verses when I can...by the way did you read, "Emotional Constipation"...a little bathroom humor verse of my own. I laughed the whole way through, Barry! Sorry, about the zit problem...a little Oxy5, might help you. Patricia |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute write...lol |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Barry - found myself laughing out loud with this - it is wonderful and I enjoyed it a bunch - make sure the paper goes on the roll the right way - Paul |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ouuu! Very fairytaleish! ARCTIC WIND |
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