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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-06-15 09:58 PM

to be in love
to revel in the setting sun,
all in the same breath;

for whom does the sky
endure such nightly anguish
to become the backdrop
of a wistful girl's dream

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-16-2003 10:23 PM).]

bklynboy
Senior Member

since 2002-12-15

Posts 660
florida

1 posted 2003-06-15 10:01 PM

doesnt have to be just a wistful's girls dream.....guys have this dream too. nice imagery here.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-15 11:13 PM

I loved the imagery. Great write.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2003-06-15 11:15 PM

inkedgoddess - I believe that dreams can come true...

BC

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

4 posted 2003-06-15 11:26 PM

Michele:

the sky endures your dreams
your star shines bright . . .

I love your picture!!
Freaked me out looking at that box
was creepy lol

But the first stanza
quite amazing
to have all of that in one breath
yes . . .
xxoo

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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

5 posted 2003-06-15 11:59 PM

beautiful write Mish and love the new pic

apoetdreams
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 52
NJ, USA

6 posted 2003-06-16 12:02 PM

This was quite beautiful...and true to heart.

Make your words as sweet as honey, someday you may have to eat them.

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

7 posted 2003-06-16 12:23 PM

~sigh~ nope, not just a girl's dream...

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

8 posted 2003-06-16 06:56 AM

thanks for stopping by,
glad it made you feel something
sue......yes, without a scratch

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

9 posted 2003-06-16 08:10 PM

lmao over here TG

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

10 posted 2003-06-16 08:26 PM

As one who has endured some of the most beautiful sunsets & sunrises imagineable - Lonely or heartbroken;
I still believe one day someone will long to share that beauty as often as possible.
Here's wishing we both find someone to share the passion of love & the beauty of a sunset.
Great write - & as always, looking forward to more of your beautiful poetry

[This message has been edited by dreambuilder (06-16-2003 08:28 PM).]

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

11 posted 2003-06-17 03:34 AM

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

12 posted 2003-06-17 06:44 AM

thanks for seeing this view with me, all

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

13 posted 2003-06-18 11:49 AM

For whom does the sky endure...
I like that thought girlielocks.

Powerful presentation, almost like
a dream within a dream.

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

14 posted 2003-06-18 07:20 PM

enjoyed this

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

15 posted 2008-02-22 08:57 PM

to be in love
to revel in the setting sun,
all in the same breath;...............""

Lovely Penned..

ARCTIC WIND

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