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Open Poetry #27

Surround

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-17 11:55 AM

Surround

it was not
so much
that I wanted
to touch
your skin
my heart
wanted
to hold you
and in
being held there
every second
you would
feel my touch
in it’s beat

Larry C

Member Patricius

since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

1 posted 2003-06-17 12:11 PM

Helen,
And it couldn't get better than that.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

2 posted 2003-06-17 12:11 PM

Now THIS is beautiful!!!!

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

3 posted 2003-06-17 04:34 PM

wow! perfect, just perfect!

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-06-17 09:42 PM

Only a twit would resist this offer

topsyturveychick
Member

since 2003-01-19

Posts 57
Bris,QLD,Aus

5 posted 2003-06-17 10:29 PM

:'( Tears in my eyes. This is a Beautiful poem. Thankyou for the insite. Nothing is Better.

I asked God how much he loved me...
He said this much...
And streched out his arms and Died.

**Sunshine**

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2003-06-18 05:20 AM

your heart is beautiful

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

7 posted 2003-06-18 07:19 AM

Poetic surround - It doesn't get better...

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

8 posted 2003-06-18 08:53 AM

God Helen . . .

yes - I agree with Raph up there

this is endearing
so so true
xxoo

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

9 posted 2003-06-18 09:51 AM

Helen - very touching - thanks for wonderful words that touch a heart - Paul

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2008-02-22 05:51 PM

Very Touching and Lovely!

ARCTIC WIND

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