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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA 
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In this world I can’t see or speak, My mind goes blank, The air grows heavier, Silence sings, As my salty tears sting. What has come over me, Where is the light, My body is weak, I know I can’t win this fight. As evil lurks inside, The devil takes away my pride, This is undeniable, And all my cold heart can take. The choice is no longer mine, Nothing can reach me in time, I am now his in this unknown world, Don’t save me, Enslave me. |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
This is very sad...I hope happier times come your way soon.  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nicely thought,,, and expressed... A voice of honesty |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Very moving. Eric |
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martina Member
since 2003-06-19
Posts 59 |
YO well thought out keeping writing u are good MARTINA |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you all for your kind words. The world as we know it has a lot of unknowns. ~Kelly~ |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
"Don’t save me, Enslave me." Very powerful words there! I really liked it! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very touching writing |
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Hockeychick19 Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430Massachusetts, USA |
Thank you Timothysangel1973 and Passing Shadows I'm glad you enjoyed it. :-) (((hugs))) ~Kelly~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very tender write, sad.  ARCTIC WIND |
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