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Turn Around |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York 
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Work + Boredem + Paper + Pen = POEM! ******************************************* ~*~ Turn Around ~*~ I never saw such a sad face. I never saw your eyes or teeth or a touch of heaven upon your heart. Perhaps if you turned around, and let me see you for you and not what others see- Don't be scared, I won't hurt you. For you are forever more a great person. Turn around dear one and show me your face, those frightened eyes, and that heart that we all love so much. ~*~ Turn Around ~*~ ****************************************** Peace love and happiness be with all you forever and always! "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You see without seeing. Who would not turn around, being invited so lovingly? Lovely write, dear Windsong. Love, Margherita |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Thanks. Peace! "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Kirah: Jesus this is beautiful . . . if this is what happens when you are walking and bored I cannot wait to see when you are concentrating! lol xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-23-2003 08:04 PM).] |
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Startime55 Member Elite
since 2003-04-05
Posts 2148Alberta, Canada |
You wish to see the soul within the eyes...a good heart and dear person you reveal in the words you pen from your heart...Beautiful.. |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
littlewing, you'd have to read more of my stuff to see what happens when I "concentrate"...I can't concentrate when I right otherwise it comes out crap, but when I don't...it comes out like this...Thanks for you warm reply, it really made my day a bit better...Peace! Star...Hmm...I forget what I was gonna say! Darn it! I guess it was a simple thank you, you also made by day a bit better...like everyone else here, love ya! May Peace, Love and Happiness fill your hearts always and forever... ~*~ Kirah ~*~ "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Kirah, your caring words were sung as a beautiful song on a warm, and gentle wind. Very loving--and lovely...  Loves'n hugs, Linda |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
*very delicately replies* Ow, I mean Aw, thank you Linda. (Sorry, I'm in a lot of pain.) I was bored at work. I was able to write two poems in 15 minutes. I was giving a girl her lunch break...The other one is in Teen Poetry #6. But anyways, thank you for your support and your awesome poems! Peace!  ~*~ Kirah ~*~ "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
LOVE THIS! and love your signature line too |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Thanks passing...Those chinse fortune cookies sure tell the truth sometimes, don't they? peace. "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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WinterWren Senior Member
since 2002-12-01
Posts 1044...Coming to |
I finally got around to reading some of yours that I've missed. And I gotta say, Im glad I did. I really love this one, short but sweet. It just might be my favorite of yours, though it would be tough to pick between your other works. Excellent Job Sweets, keep it up! WinterWren |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sounds like a great song.... peace to you |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Lol. Winter, theres' plenty more where that came from. For everyone, I appreciate what you have to say to me. Anything you say will be taken to heart because I'm sure that's where you release is, is it not? Peace.  ~*~ Kirah ~*~ "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
That was really sweet, and I don't know if you realized it, but your poem is in the shape of a girl. I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
really? I can't see it...But thanks! lol. Peace! "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Beautiful imagery. I feel like you are talking about someone I know....Me possibly??? HeHeHe.....Tima Some women wait for something to change and nothing does, so they change themselves. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
She's got a hat on her head. It's just her face or it could be a lamp I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war, If you can tell me something worth fighting for -coldplay [This message has been edited by Wind (06-25-2003 10:37 PM).] |
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WindSong Member
since 2002-12-23
Posts 313Long Island, New York |
Timothysangel....- Hehe. Thanks! Peace! Wind- I see the lamp shade, just not the...girl. Peace. ~*~ Kirah ~*~ "Many a false step is made by standing still." -Chinese Fortune Cookie |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is a loving poem. Good message here, everything should think in that positive light.  ARCTIC WIND |
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