Open Poetry #27 |
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You Write Me |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace ![]() |
You Write Me what hand have you that when I am stirred one touch can calm fears are things that lined my past distant now in a memory gently traced sensation of power in this unselfish gift that gives not takes content now in this signature within soft stroke of ink I find my center |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OneSlickLady~ You write in softest whisper of ink~ Beautiful~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Larry C![]()
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
L-a-r-r-y If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. [This message has been edited by Larry C (06-17-2003 06:51 PM).] |
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Broken Member
since 2000-03-12
Posts 271The woods |
I like the way you write, short and to the point. Enjoyed. ~Broken~ Such griefs with such men well agree, |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Helen: yesssssssss much solace indeed which you so deserve xxoo |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A fine, calming hand, indeed... thank you Helen, for this treat... |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
Beautiful write Helen - thanks - Paul |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed ![]() |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
one touch can calm fears are things that lined my past distant now in a memory That kind of writing can only be done by the most kind and caring hand. *S* I like this very much... it's beautiful! *S* |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Helen, breathtaking if I must say so. Goodness! It's wonderful! ![]() Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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joyfull girl Junior Member
since 2003-06-10
Posts 15 |
in so few words you have created such beauty amazing -Joy |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Ah absolutely beautiful..the writing too..grins |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Poetic I think! lol ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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