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Open Poetry #27

Tear Down The Walls

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-06-16 10:16 PM

Fingers red raw
upon the stone
clawing at the ephemeral
in desperate need
for a glimpse of a Promise
that lies beyond
this mortal cell

Laqe
Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 72
Michigan, US

1 posted 2003-06-16 10:31 PM

I think we all feel like this sometimes.. I like this work.

.Echo.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

2 posted 2003-06-16 10:55 PM

yes once in a while just a glimmer helps, doesn't it......i think i had a moment in the dentists chair this afternoon having route canal under nitrous.....yes a moment of bliss..........

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-06-16 11:01 PM

Thanks laqe appreciate it

Inked read heaven and hell below and you'll see my luck when i get those glimpses lol

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-17 02:31 AM

ouch...cool

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-06-17 02:51 AM

head turns
in quick snap
awakening
to the same
scratching
bleeding
promise
on the other side of the wall

tips of my fingers numb
from this one Raph
(no kidding lol)
xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (06-17-2003 04:40 AM).]

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-18 12:41 PM

this needs to breathe . . .

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

7 posted 2003-06-18 05:19 PM

A great piece! I like the energy.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-06-18 11:06 PM

Thanks all one day i'll wake up and do it..in the meantime..i need more cake excuse me

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

9 posted 2008-02-23 11:07 AM

Interesting Write A

ARCTIC WIND

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