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lingering behind |
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Drexler_McStyles Member
since 2002-11-18
Posts 195Venice, Ca |
how dare you take the a cappella out of my novella if I havent even my voice then what is left to me? other than organs that are failing like mathematics and relationships that cause scandals and heartburn all the sun shining up north doesn’t filter very far down the map I can say that much without looking outside and photos on the nightstand are no substitute for your fitted curves here in the hollow places there is a sizzling upstairs dinner is burning a record is spinning pinwheels next to the lizard the turbo fan whines about some oil it was promised raspberries and cranberries are down with the russian but none of these things mean much without you here to bring them to life Casey |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"but none of these things mean much without you here to bring them to life" so true...nothing is nothing...without someone to share it with...h |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This: "there is a sizzling upstairs dinner is burning a record is spinning pinwheels next to the lizard the turbo fan whines about some oil" shaking my head here....YEAH, I wanna write like THAT. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very cool |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Wonderful Write ARCTIC WIND |
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