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From Allah's Garden to Persia a final letter
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From Allah's Garden to Persia a final letter |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
My husband, I did not chose the time to leave you It was in trying to give you the child We both so desired as part of our life That Allah decided to grace me with death And leave you behind to endure. You were always a gentle strength to me And since I have been gone I know It was the strength inside you And the memories of our love That sustained you. I am proud to have been yours And danced mornings on dew With nothing between you and I But the air we breathed as we were Surrounded as if in incense by the joy True love brings to mortal souls I await your arrival But do not rush my Dear There is an eternity to share in this place And we had but a few short seasons there In the Persia of our birth to remember And I would not have you hurry to leave Just to be with me. Instead, I ask you to look with your slow rove of eye On the landscapes we shared And I In the night will come and sit by your bed Touching your brow with cool Again feeling The desires of Earth Allah is kind But you my Husband Are my love Fear not I wait for only you Even here |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I am proud to have been yours And danced mornings on dew With nothing between you and I But the air we breathed as we were Surrounded as if in incense by the joy True love brings to mortal souls When I desperately need to read beauty, I'll return here... This is just magnificent. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Cpat, A wonderful write, enjoyed. |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Ron, The tears briefly dried. And then you choose to grace us again. Of this verse there were not simply warm tears falling soft upon the keys, but rather outcries from my soul. Yes, yes...I can revisit this place you have taken me. And I shall, my Sorcerer, I shall. Patricia |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I await your arrival But do not rush my Dear There is an eternity to share in this place And we had but a few short seasons there In the Persia of our birth to remember And I would not have you hurry to leave Just to be with me. Instead, I ask you to look with your slow rove of eye On the landscapes we shared And I In the night will come and sit by your bed Touching your brow with cool Again feeling The desires of Earth Allah is kind But you my Husband Are my love Fear not I wait for only you Even here ~*~ You've got to admire a willing, waiting, spirit... Never say never...  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
any body ever tell ya your good... youre reaaally good....  ;squeeze: |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
I missed this one... Beautiful Susan |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I can't believe I missed this one!! Beautiful..romantic..very touching. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Ron...This is very touching! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
lucky for me, someone unearthed this near-buried-treasure |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Ron, maybe I should have you do the Eulogy for my death, when that time comes. Excellent write. Thanx...you sound good as a woman...(just kiddin') Lots of feelings written into this tender write of love. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I agree with Sunshine on this one ~Enjoyed this deeply  ARCTIC WIND |
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