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Open Poetry #27

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1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-06-25 08:16 AM

Resounding Universe

I have whispered
and talked
to a brick wall
and all that
came back was
an echo of
my voice
in call
there is
a mile
in an inch
of distance
and what
matters is
what is in
the space of
that existence

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

1 posted 2003-06-25 08:19 AM

I like this poem of yours,
Makes me think;

To me life is always measured
By the echo of silence through the shadow

Gloom

[This message has been edited by Professor Gloom (06-25-2003 08:19 AM).]

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

2 posted 2003-06-25 08:31 AM

Oh goodness. This is so good. I have talked to a brick wall this week, heard the echo. Then I talked to my true love this week and found so much I didn't know.

I hope that makes sense.

This verse has so much meaning for me!

Patricia

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
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