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Waiting for the train
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Waiting for the train |
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Master Senior Member
since 1999-08-18
Posts 1867Boston, MA 
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While waiting for the train, I saw them kissing. They were young and knew nothing of the art form. Their train came and left. Of course, they missed it. They remained there frozen across the platform. It was probably his first time. He seemed diffident. She kissed with confidence, but rather, mindlessly. I started wondering how we kissed differently. You kissed with faithfulness and I, with honesty. I got in the train-car and continued watching them. I thought about us and it made me shudder. Like them, we never thought about how fortunate We were to be together, until we lost each other. Check out my poetry here: http://www.unknownpoets.com/db/authors/master [This message has been edited by Master (06-17-2003 01:49 AM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cool |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
 That was beautiful! How many I wonder can relate with this feeling. I love you guys in here............. We are all kindred spirits, though miles may seperate us! Cheers, Cheers, Cheers!!!!!  If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance. George Bernard Shaw |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Beautiful ARCTIC WIND |
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