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dreambuilder
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since 2003-03-23
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caddyshack

0 posted 2003-06-16 03:08 AM



I swear
at times
I see beauty
in you
I don't even
think God noticed

As God sees
beauty in the world
Perspective grants me
the gift of seeing
the blessings of you

I am proud of you
You are a miracle
and a light
in this night
that is my life

. . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream  . . .

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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
Posts 772
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1 posted 2003-06-16 03:22 AM


bet the women you wrote this for was happy

very nice poem thanks for sharing

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
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2 posted 2003-06-16 03:25 AM


I am proud of you
You are a miracle
and a light
in this night
that is my life


This is a beautiful poem...such
love is felt in it. Thanks for sharing your heart with us.  
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (06-16-2003 03:26 AM).]

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-06-16 03:26 AM


just gorgeous
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-06-17 01:55 AM


Beautiful writing here dream
She is extremely lucky
to have you indeed

This is amazing
xxoo

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-06 06:14 PM


Thats so nice of you

ARCTIC WIND

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