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Open Poetry #27

Feel Better My Dear

pisumnux
Junior Member

since 2003-06-11

Posts 49
Troy, NY

0 posted 2003-06-16 05:53 PM

I wrote this one back at the end of April/early May

Feel better my dear.
The sky is grey,
when you are not well.
The air is cold
and the rain does fall,
when you are feeling ill.

But the cold bites harder
And the rain soaks deeper
because I am not with you.
Because I am not there
to hold you and touch you
and make you feel better,

The wind tears through me
like a fire hose through a curtain.
But there is hope.
For soon I will be with you.
Soon the sky will clear
and the sun will shine
and the air will become warm
as I wrap my arms around you
and hold you
and touch you
and make you feel better again.

Even now as I look out the window
the trees, cold and lifeless
not more than a week ago
are starting to regrow,
are starting to become reborn.
As the breath of life flows into these trees,
may the breath of life flow into you
and cure what ails you.
So I may once again hold you
and touch you
and make you feel better again.

If it weren't for my horse...

Seymour Tabin
Member Empyrean

since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

1 posted 2003-06-16 05:57 PM

pisumnux
The wonder of love, enjoyed.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-16 06:43 PM

Soft and romantic...James

Foxyoasis
Senior Member

since 2003-06-10

Posts 974
Atlantic Beach,Fla

3 posted 2003-06-17 01:47 AM

your making my ego really big my dear

jk ahh how i loved that poem.

Fool me once shame on you.....Fool me twice shame on me.....

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2003-06-17 01:48 AM

nice

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-02-06 06:12 PM

Enjoyed the Write

ARCTIC WIND

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