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Tomorrow's Write
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Tomorrow's Write |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Tomorrow's Write I picture myself in a crowd, not standing out among the bold and the beautiful. But I know I have heart and a poetic voice that can chip away that hard exterior, if only allowed. Behind this smile I wear is uncertainty, testing me, my life a lie at the moment. Always mystery in the air, tempting me with perhaps, or maybes. Tomorrow it may be raining, but the sun will be shining if only in your words. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
"Tomorrow it may be raining, but the sun will be shining if only in your words." Oh yes even a gloomy day can be brighten'd up with your words  A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. I know I have felt these feelings from time to time.. Yeah, that poetic voice can do it, huh? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thanks Bernie. Words can brighten any gloomy day for me. The right voice with the write words...can do it for me, Barry.  M |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Maureen, you may not be standing out but you are always outstanding  |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
Tomorrow it may be raining, but the sun will be shining if only in your words. M- You always stand out here. Your words are beautiful...Such a wonder flow and you bring to me so much wisdom. When I feel gloomy...I write and then as if someone waved a magic wand, the gloom evaporates. So, yes the sun shines for you with your words, but you also make the sun shine for me with your words. May every tomorrow be a beautiful one for you! Hugs, Patricia |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
This poem is full of truth. I loved it. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You are all heart Maureen~ Believe in it, like I believe in you... even when the sun doesn't shine. hugs~ |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Even if tomorrow becomes speechless I believe the sun will break from its bed of clouds to smile on you for such grace and heart you offer. ( ...and if not, try this one ) **S** |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
But I know I have heart and a poetic voice that can chip away that hard exterior, if only allowed. Yes, Maureen...you do have a very loving heart and a very strong poetic voice that is very important.....anywhere that you may coose to be.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
But I know I have heart and a poetic voice that can chip away that hard exterior, if only allowed. chipping away at our own hard exteriors with words and writing is a growth experience I think we go through in various ways.... the idea of not standing out in a crowd.lol... somehow I think is a bit of a misnomer...we all know your wrods stand out on these pages as you have shared them... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 awesome! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love the Last part of the poem! Very Much Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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