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Inability to Look Past
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Inability to Look Past |
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LastMoments Member
since 2003-03-07
Posts 92 |
Look at the way You sheltered me in Scarred by insecurity Of everything you made in me I'm listening to my heart But it's black and blue I'd listen to my thoughts But they're all about you Chorus You were my first And you're always around In the walls of my mind Condemned for my thoughts You're always around I needed you there I need you now You're what made me You're the memory inside You're what I can't forget End Chorus It was about the first chance I couldn't let go I opened my eyes To see what I lost You crippled my mind Now I'm forced to restrain And rather then heal I met head on with pain Chorus You were my first And you're always around In the walls of my mind Condemned for my thoughts You're always around I needed you there I need you now You're what made me You're the memory inside You're what I can't forget End Chorus You taught me to care And then you left me alone My heart is torn, no longer shut sewn You ripped out my heart, the piece you had made You took away All you made in me Every time I see I see you there You're beyond my touch You're without a care I wanted to say You're what I miss But I miss my loss That's still lost in you Chorus You were my first And you're always around In the walls of my mind Condemned for my thoughts You're always around I needed you there I need you now You're what made me You're the memory inside You're what I can't forget End Chorus I miss, I crave But all remains in its place |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nice! I would love to hear this put to music. Chris  "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
some good potential here, but it does start to bog down a bit when it gets to this point: *** You taught me to care And then you left me alone My heart is torn, no longer shut sewn You ripped out my heart, the piece you had made You took away All you made in me *** I enjoyed the song. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 love this |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Music to the ears! lol ARCTIC WIND |
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