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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT 
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From thoughts dwelling the darkness of night feeding off emptiness and despair Such haunts that will never find the light needing to focus on their nightmare Find eyes that lay ahead not behind staring through these dreams to their futures To rise focus on the inner mind daring such thoughts possible pleasures Freefall until the moment is right believe in what your heart is needing Don't stall for your motion is the light receive it, focus before bleeding Fear is a blindness, heart is the cure. - C. Belville 02 |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Free fall~ what a nice way to go about it. You do have a way of suspending your words from the page. I am always impressed by your creative writing Craig~ |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
very cool, read the un rhymed rhymed. like this |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
Lori - without creativity they are just words. JL - just thoughts with variations ... Thank you both for the read. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
craig, powerful thoughts, i like very much. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Craig, what would I do without you? |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Powerful thoughts! ARCTIC WIND |
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