Open Poetry #27 |
Vignette 6 |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Vignette 6 quote: James Russell Lowell ~*~ A crystal flute Drained of its hold Amber liquor Liquid gold A glimmer gone gleam Now gleam raised in cry For fulfillment received Released by their sighs. [This message has been edited by Sunshine (06-16-2003 11:17 PM).] |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
I must honestly say that I don't think I understood this poem... But I loved it anyway! Very original, thank you. .Echo. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
so very absolute!! A voice of honesty |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
nice |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
and so very beautiful! keeping this Maree. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yes, Karilea...so beautiful Ethel |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Hey..you look different...still look good though? |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
I should have been paying attention to these snippets of a poetess mind much earlier than I have.... Forgive me M'lady....for I have sinned... |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Ah..this one is lovely Karilea.. Much enjoyed this keeper. ~Hugs YOU!~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Ah yes...simply beautiful, Karilea. Hugs, ~Vicky "My friends are my estate." |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
Ah that we should all have hearts so full that one more drop would overfill them! This was lovely, and a pleasure to feast my eyes on!! ~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Wouldn't it be a beautiful world if each heart was filled with love until it overflowed and spilled over onto the universe. Lovely Bon-Bon |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
A crystal flute Drained of its hold Amber liquor Liquid gold This flowed so nicely Karilea. *s M |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I can identify with that flute Karilea, as I used to say to my "favorite" husband, "I am so stressed out by you that a feather could knock me over", close right? Vignette 6 oh dear, must find 1-5 now. |
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