Open Poetry #27 |
Bedroom |
gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
Violet lovingly constrains cubic visions have trapped me well feeding me kind warmth contained within four walls every emotion this skin has ever inhaled deep. Feather soft quilt encased me in heaven like precious document gloved and snug intuiton never fails me when I'm supposed to be sleeping unexpected messages prevail. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
those pesky thoughts and lights of ascending perceptions...oh woe is we...hehehhehe |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
errrr uhhhh, you are writing about those thoughts that run freely and happily through your mind keeping you awake at night, are you not?????? smiles and hugs |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
intuiton never fails me when I'm supposed to be sleeping unexpected messages prevail. Gemma, I hate it when I'm trying to sleep and all I can do is think!! Hugs Ethel Mae |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
lee, both awake and asleep, the thinking, solving and understanding of whats going on in my life occurs in my bedroom. and a whole lot of confusion also. I think too much..even whilst asleep. I dream several dreams per night, and always remember them. which is good, and bad. Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Why is it that intuition strikes when we are supposed to be sleeping? “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson [This message has been edited by El_Campeador (07-23-2003 09:10 AM).] |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
And let me also add that I loved this poem... “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
dreams do tell more we often care to see enjoyed! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Keep on trusting your intuition, dear jewel! It won't steer you wrong! Sweet dreaming! Loves, hugs, & smiles, EA |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Perhaps it's the only time that we can be still and listen to what our souls know to be true.. I enjoyed this very much Pepper |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
The Bedroom is the most intimate, private, and secured room for the soul .... ... right next to the throne room!! Now my dreams feel complete! [This message has been edited by ctowen (07-23-2003 04:14 PM).] |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Gem - you know - God - I do despise that - brain working overtime like it always does. If I could talk to the creator ( that is a whole nother thread) I would ask that we have on/off switches installed so we can properly rejuvenate ourselves. You now . . . stress - CLICK sleepytime Rambling . . . this did give me such a sense of comfort though - made me think of a rainy day all snuggled up xxoo |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
Wait, if we had switches how would we get turned back on in the morning? (uh...you know what I mean) Gem-great writing, I to think too much when I go to bed...the rest of the day is to busy to work things out in my head Susan C. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Susan . . . Ok Ok timers then . . . |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wonderful write...as always. Eric |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Who..needs sleep anyway? Thats when you come up with the best poems (ever notice that insomniacs are some of the best writers? lol) good write gemma, sorry about your little sadness..well your big saddness |
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