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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-23 08:42 AM



Violet lovingly constrains
cubic visions
have trapped me well
feeding me kind warmth
contained within four walls
every emotion this skin
has ever inhaled deep.

Feather soft quilt
encased me in heaven
like precious document
gloved and snug
intuiton never fails me
when I'm supposed to be sleeping
unexpected messages prevail.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

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LeeJ
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1 posted 2003-07-23 08:55 AM


those pesky thoughts and lights of ascending perceptions...oh woe is we...hehehhehe
LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-23 08:57 AM


errrr uhhhh, you are writing about those thoughts that run freely and happily through your mind keeping you awake at night, are you not??????  smiles and hugs
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3 posted 2003-07-23 08:58 AM


intuiton never fails me
when I'm supposed to be sleeping
unexpected messages prevail.


Gemma, I hate it when I'm trying to sleep
and all I can do is think!!  
Hugs  
Ethel Mae

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-07-23 09:02 AM


lee, both awake and asleep, the thinking, solving and understanding of whats going on in my life occurs in my bedroom. and a whole lot of confusion also. I think too much..even whilst asleep. I dream several dreams per night, and always remember them. which is good, and bad.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

El_Campeador
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5 posted 2003-07-23 09:10 AM


Why is it that intuition strikes when we are supposed to be sleeping?  

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

[This message has been edited by El_Campeador (07-23-2003 09:10 AM).]

El_Campeador
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6 posted 2003-07-23 09:12 AM


And let me also add that I loved this poem...

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

ecrivan
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7 posted 2003-07-23 10:29 AM


dreams do tell more we often care to see enjoyed!


Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-07-23 10:33 AM


Keep on trusting your intuition, dear jewel!
It won't steer you wrong!

Sweet dreaming!

Loves, hugs, & smiles,
EA

peppermint35
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9 posted 2003-07-23 03:52 PM


Perhaps it's the only time that we can be still and listen to what our souls know to be true..

I enjoyed this very much

Pepper
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ctowen
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10 posted 2003-07-23 04:13 PM


The Bedroom is the most intimate, private, and secured room for the soul ....

        

               ... right next to the throne room!!

                  Now my dreams feel complete!

[This message has been edited by ctowen (07-23-2003 04:14 PM).]

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-07-23 04:25 PM


Gem - you know - God - I do despise that - brain working overtime like it always does.
If I could talk to the creator ( that is a whole nother thread) I would ask that we have on/off switches installed so we can properly rejuvenate ourselves.

You now . . . stress - CLICK
sleepytime

Rambling . . . this did give me such a sense of comfort though - made me think of a rainy day all snuggled up
xxoo

Susan Caldwell
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12 posted 2003-07-23 04:32 PM


Wait, if we had switches how would we get turned back on in the morning? (uh...you know what I mean)

Gem-great writing, I to think too much when I go to bed...the rest of the day is to busy to work things out in my head

Susan C.

JamesMichael
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13 posted 2003-07-24 01:03 AM


Nice writing...James
littlewing
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14 posted 2003-07-24 04:42 AM


Susan . . .
Ok Ok timers then . . .

passing shadows
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15 posted 2003-07-24 06:32 AM


awesome write
Ericc
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16 posted 2003-07-24 10:13 AM


Wonderful write...as always.
Eric

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17 posted 2003-07-24 11:51 AM


Who..needs sleep anyway? Thats when you come up with the best poems (ever notice that insomniacs are some of the best writers? lol) good write gemma, sorry about your little sadness..well your big saddness
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