Open Poetry #27 |
There To Catch Me |
garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
From Webshots ~~><~~ I am glad you are there listening for my hearts call Knowing you will ever be to catch me if I should fall You know how much I need to feel your love so dear Even when we are apart we feel each other near No matter what the distance or between us be the space Whenever our hearts call each other before my eyes appears your face Seeing your loving smile as you tenderly look at me Deep into your eyes nothing but love I see Or in a gentle breeze when listening close we hear A soft whisper of love to each other we hear clear Yes, I am glad you are there listening for my hearts call Knowing you will ever be to catch me if I should fall ~~><~~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-22-2003 10:32 AM).] |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Ethel... wow and then *sigh* this is really beautiful! I love the picture, it's one of my favorites and your words go perfectly with it....the flow here is perfect |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Ethel, I do believe this has to be one of your best! Just beautiful and I am putting it into my library! hugs, Chris "At one glance |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
garysgirl A lovely write, enjoyed. |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
This was like a soft whisper. I agree with SEA, it had a beautiful flow. Even though you're not my lover, lol, you're always here to catch me when i fall. so i guess, though i'm not in love, i can totally relate to your words, and why? because of you! much love, gem xxxx Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Sea, thank you so very much!! . Chris, into your library? Thank you!! . Seymour, thank you, kind Sir!! . Gemma, LOL You are a mess. Yep, I'll be there for you when you fall! Thanks !! :heart" . . I appreciate all of you so much!! Hugs to each of you Ethel |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Ethel - this is just lovely! Thank you. |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Ethel, this is a beautiful poem. As well as the picture. I am so glad you have someone to love and someone who loves you back. |
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PKreturns Member
since 2003-07-21
Posts 362New Orleans, LA |
"Knowing you will ever be..." Great phrase here. Enjoyed reading this. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This one was especially lovely, dear Ethel Mae! Loves 'n huggums, Linda |
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AnamCara Junior Member
since 2003-06-25
Posts 41Canada |
Dear Ethel, You have drawn a beautiful picture with your words alone...and the one you chose to accent your poem fits perfectly also. I really enjoyed reading. Thank you for sharing. Love, Angela |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
garysgirl - you romantic you, what a treasure of a write... BC |
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timothysangel1973
since 2001-12-03
Posts 1725Never close enough |
Beautiful write Ethel...love the pic too! |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Classically romantic ... *sigh* Enjoyed. |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
Romantic,beautiful,soft, and snensous all rolled into one.You amaze me more each time.The picture fits well with your words.An awesome job and one for my library. angelblueyes |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Very nice and paints a pretty picture. Thanks for sharing BB |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Such a pretty picture of the treasure you hold. All Blessings, TD |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice,,enjoyed.. |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Lady In White, thank you! . Bernie, thanks! . Sue, thank you, sweet lady! . . I appreciate all of you. Heart hugs to each of you, "If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
PK, thank you. Glad you enjoyed. . Linda, thank you, sweet lady! . Angela, thank you for your sweet words! . . I really appreciate all of you. Heart hugs to each of you Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandan, thanks! . Bill, thank you! . Tima, thank you, lady! . . I appreciate ya'll very much. Heart hugs to all of you Ethel |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Janette, thanks! I'm glad that you liked it. . angelblueeyes, thank you! That makes me feel good to be put in your library! I love your name. . Kathleen, thank you sweet lady! . Glenn, thanks! . . I really apprecciate all of you. Heart hugs to each of you Ethel |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
No matter what the distance or between us be the space Whenever our hearts call each other before my eyes appears your face This is just lovely... left me with a smile. *S* |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Beautiful! Eric |
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VOE Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119From the land of Camelot |
What a fantastic, and loving piece, Ethel, and your man is one lucky guy!!! This has got to be my favorite of yours, although you make it hard to choose, as they are all heartfelt and beautiful.....I agree with BC...you are definitely a romantic, and thank goodness for that!!! ~V~ I speak from the Voice Of Experience |
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ambrish Member
since 2003-03-27
Posts 257India |
Yes, I am glad you are there listening for my hearts call Knowing you will ever be to catch me if I should fall lovely its only love which can urge to write such deep a poem |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
nice to have that feeling, I bet. lovely write Ethel Mae |
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