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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-16 10:06 PM


Hey, voice in my head,
talk about something I've never heard before.
Tell me something I don't know.
Hey,
is anybody home?
I'm feeling a little lonely
feeling a little low.
I crossed my fingers and blew away
every petal that my life became.
Is it so wrong
to cry under the water, to let the drops consume me.
To find it to be so ordinary..
To pull out my heart and show you the pain..
I crossed my heart and hoped to die,
but I'm still here
I'm still alive.
Hey, voice in my head,
doesn't anybody know the answers..
Doesn't anybody know why?
Why do the one's that love us
make us cry?
I mixed your words into the puzzle
and still they didn't seem quite sincere..
I forget about the way you made me
twitch.



© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
the_loner_23
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1 posted 2003-06-16 11:12 PM


This is cute. I loved it.

Cold hands means a warm heart

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-06-17 02:22 AM


yeah!
Artic Wind
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3 posted 2008-02-06 06:29 PM


very Much Enjoyed your little poem here

ARCTIC WIND

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