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Open Poetry #27
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Laqe
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since 2003-06-15
Posts 72
Michigan, US
0 posted 2003-06-16 10:06 PM

Use me.
Touch me.
Taste me.
Tease me.
Tell me that
You'll never leave me.
Fill my body
With your sin.
Take a breath
And keep it in.
Close your eyes
And count to three -
For here, tonight
I'll set you free.


Readers, be brutal.

.Echo.

[This message has been edited by Laqe (06-16-2003 10:08 PM).]
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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
1 posted 2003-06-16 10:18 PM

Be brutal about what? I'm going to sit on some ice now..grin
Laqe
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since 2003-06-15
Posts 72
Michigan, US
2 posted 2003-06-16 10:19 PM

Haha!!

.Echo.
inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
3 posted 2003-06-16 10:47 PM

Please someone set me free!!!!!!!!!!
i am more than ready
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-06-17 02:34 AM

good write, I sure can relate, if you only knew
Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2008-02-06 06:31 PM

A very Good write Indeed

ARCTIC WIND
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