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Open Poetry #27

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-06-16 10:33 PM

Let's skip to the good parts,
of where life may be enjoyed.
There's so many dishes in this sink,
so many pets to feed.
I can't even feed myself!
Such frustration, I must clean.
This room is dirty,
and it's driving me crazy.
This house is a sty,
you know? A pain to my eyes.
No can of air freshener will do it,
we'll just have to set it afire,
say "Screw it.. It's summer,
no one cleans in the summer."
Turn on the A/C
(it's like an icee from the heaven's above)
Wipe the couch of crumbled paper and move
the ashtray.
I'll clean tomorrow,
watch TV today.

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

1 posted 2003-06-16 11:10 PM

Oh I know how this feels. Who wouldn't? LOL Great poem.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Laqe
Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 72
Michigan, US

2 posted 2003-06-16 11:12 PM

I never clean, I know how that feels. Haha. This poem was very cute. I like it.

.Echo.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-06-17 02:21 AM

very cute write

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-06 06:28 PM

Very Cute Write Indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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