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1:20 a.m.
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1:20 a.m. |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
1:20 a.m. What do I have to do to make you tell me you're in love with me? How many times must I trace the stars... Light the moon so that it shines on you just right? How long must I wait before the sun goes out and my heart is drowned in darkness? Forever, I've loved you... But I failed to recognize it - I didn't want to believe it. Now, all I want is for you to end this torture and let my heart begin to beat again. All I want is for you to tell me you want me. All I need is to hear you breathe the words my soul is gasping to inspire. Tell me you love me And I promise, this time I will not run away. This time, I'll admit I love you, Too. .Echo. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Yes...timing and position are essential...James |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Echo: This is amazingly honest A beautiful request indeed May it be reality . . . xxoo |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Tender and powerful! The longing is strongly felt. Well you just admitted ... Love, Margherita  |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
It is now... I wrote that about a man I fell in love with and he is now my boyfriend of nearly five months. Thank you for your comments, all. .Echo. |
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raevynsbreath Member
since 2003-06-06
Posts 64Mi, USA |
it's good babygirl. i be lovin' ya. everyday. _rae |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Is good poem, but AARGH! The color! Makes my poor eyeballs feel just the way they did at 1:20 a.m....... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
I like to be different. .Echo. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
different pains me but less than being "normal" I enjoyed this one write on |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Glad it turned out well and you've overcome the hesitation and fear that ruins too many romances or chances. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Laqe Enjoyed the read. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
All I want is for you to tell me you want me. all? all? all i want is a sugar daddy and a boytoy on the side................. heartfelt words of yours [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-16-2003 11:01 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
hehehe...gotta agree with inked |
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Laqe Member
since 2003-06-15
Posts 72Michigan, US |
As a matter of fact, they are heartfelt. Your sarcasm aside, thanks for reading, I suppose. .Echo. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
lol ARCTIC WIND |
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