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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk 
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My Highschool life short and simple ___________________________________________________ You call me the loser As I walk alone Through the corridors No friends to turn to No friends to call No friends to help me When I feel lost in this hole |
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skyshine 
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
Aack! I can relate all too well!   ~ElizabethDreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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Alicethruglass Member
since 2001-06-19
Posts 368 |
I loved high school, but if you ask me to remember anything about it, I couldn't today. ~A~ |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
nei..youre not a loser i remember highschool some ppl have 2 much time on their hands but not enough time 2 get 2 know u...(sorry bout the poor grammar blame it on the splint)  If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Honey, I can only tell you one thing: you're only a loser if you think you are. That sounds harsh, but it's the absolute, undeniable truth. Trust me. I know. home, home, where I wanted to go |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
thank you all you new poets replying to my work and wind that was my past not my future im not a loser but i felt like i was in hightschool i go to college second year at it im ok now still goos to write about the past don't you think no matter how bad it was hope you check my other poems out thanks my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
Nice to meet ya. Sorry, sometimes it's hard to tell if a person is writing about now, or later or the past or just writing for the heck of it. Sure, I'll check out some of your poems. home, home, where I wanted to go |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
nice to meet you two wind well i was going to say glad you enjoyed the poem but really its not a poem to enjoy lol my other poems are about love and stuff so there enjoyable lol glad you read the poem will have to do yeah lol my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
You know Lee I can relate to this really well because I dont necessarily think that anyone is a loser EVER. They just havent found anyone they can relate to yet. As far as I am concerned, the loser is the one who goes through life THINKING he has it all when in reality he ends up alone forever . . . I loved this one the best because it is short sweet and utterly truthful No - none of us were ever losers Please do not ever think that xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (06-16-2003 07:59 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...I was the bully, i had lots of friends like the write though...brought me back a good 15 years |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
ahhh! Every should have friends  Everyone does, Just when someone feels lonely there mind is playing tricks on them, saying they don't have friends! ARCTIC WIND |
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