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Open Poetry #27

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gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-06-16 05:26 PM

There is purple in you

not bruised
but perfectly formed scars

here lies the wait
for you to unravel

let me play like kitten

and unzip the smile.

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-06-16 05:28 PM

lol.. now careful with that unzipping..you are in public you know! Oh wait... no..can't say that in here..LMAO.

Nicely done G... and the image of unzipping a smile one I like...

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-16 05:31 PM

Awesome write my friend.

Cold hands means a warm heart

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

3 posted 2003-06-16 05:34 PM

Like a kitten eh? Well i know you have claws..lol

Ericc
Member Elite

since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-06-16 06:25 PM

Wonderful!
Eric

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

5 posted 2003-06-16 06:48 PM

Whatever you say kitten...James

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

6 posted 2003-06-16 07:47 PM

hehehehe . . .

damn you make me smile
with your ability to write
anything at all
and amazingly
xxoo

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-17 03:38 AM

cool!

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

8 posted 2008-02-07 09:15 AM

Interesting Write!

ARCTIC WIND

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