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Of Simple Needs
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Of Simple Needs |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Of Simple Needs Each day becomes a bit more painful as the whispering of my thoughts begin their cease. It might have been once, the challenge of you, to watch you watching me, the next of you sending waves of by-gone years stirring the simple needs of love. The patience taught is running out, the timer turned over one too many times, the sand soaked in humidity, stuck on a yesterday, to never continue. Grains of me still cling, but know the need to go on. There were no last words. If so, my mind has rubbed them out, protecting me from feeling cheated. I have fallen by the wayside, lines of music never ours, just old refrains that use to be. ~~*~~ I had an image of you, this Knight who had lent his sword to me to slay all the dragons in my life, to free myself from those memories that continue to shroud my existence. You are here now, in my view, traveling my parallel but back away each time I reach for you, never allowing me to cross your plane, to add the simple of me to color the darkness of you. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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the_loner_23 Member Ascendant
since 2002-06-08
Posts 5479Jacksonville, Florida, USA |
Beautifully written my friend. Cold hands means a warm heart |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
never allowing me to cross your plane, to add the simple of me to color the darkness of you Maureen, Your writing cuts to the core of any given situation. Awesome. Chris "Hope" is the thing with feathers- |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
There were no last words. If so, my mind has rubbed them out, protecting me from feeling cheated. Minds do that....as always you have phrases I wish I had thought of.. excellence once again  |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
M. I feel the same as 'Deer, you come through so often with so many unique ways of expressing thought that I wish I had thought of as well. Nicely written. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Julie, I can always count on you to read my words. Hugs M Chris,*s You make me smile. I never know what is going to come out of my mind until it does. Thank you hugs M Michael, well that sure is a compliment for me, because I always wish I could write like you. Maybe we can do a duet some day.   M Barry, sometimes I think I twist the words and phrases around..sort of like those Pennsylvania Dutch do here. I think I have been living among them a bit too long ... 28 years to be exact Thank you very much hugs M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
M, I am not sure what to say here...this one hurts |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
there is nothing much to say except, thank you Dixie for always being here. hugs M |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Your poems are full of emotion, Its good to let it out ARCTIC WIND |
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