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Alicethruglass
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since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

0 posted 2003-06-16 01:01 PM

More Of Less

My words have lost their meaning so,
will halt when I shall let all go.
The bothering of phrases lost.
No matter, freeing was the cost.

I ponder this to wonder that
remembering once a loss of hat.
Of horse and ride and scenic view.
No matter, freeing me from you.

A visit never feeds the need
nor heeds the call of longing read.
I mess with rhymes escape today
in words, mine seemed to lose their way.

To rhyme or not, I never know.
They press the keys, and fingers go
and grow the lines from feelings then
and now they empty once again.

Mirror mirror, on the wall
standing short of feeling tall.
To Alice me, and leave me small
I turn away, towards lonely hall.

And see before me, emptiness,
a shadow's walk down "more of less".

~A~

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2003-06-16 02:25 PM

Well Ms ALICE~
You are wonderful in anybody's ink !!!
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Edder
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since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

2 posted 2003-06-16 02:49 PM

enjoyed!

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

3 posted 2003-06-16 02:49 PM

Very much enjoyed!

home, home, where I wanted to go

-coldplay

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

4 posted 2003-06-16 02:52 PM

You make it look so easy Alice, don't you think for one minute that your words ever lose their meaning.

I hope tomorrow will be looking up for you.
Hugs from the heart!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

5 posted 2003-06-17 03:48 AM

enjoyed this much

Alicethruglass
Member

since 2001-06-19

Posts 368

6 posted 2003-06-17 10:02 AM

Marge, thank you

Edder, Wind, Dixie, thanks for stopping by.

Lori, sometimes it's easier than others.
I believe it is time to break away from the words.

A

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-02-07 03:28 PM

Enjoyed the Poem Alice

ARCTIC WIND

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