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Open Poetry #27

Amour

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-06-16 09:32 AM

the whispers of your
voice

mesmerizes yet in
my mind

embers of you still
smolder
within me

memories
of our
amorous rendezvous

are not fantasies I
perceive
the     reality
of you         is true

QjQ

Mon Cherie

Senior Member

since 2001-10-31

Posts 922
Land of Never-ending Summers

1 posted 2003-06-16 11:59 AM

I really like the ending, QjQ.

memories
of our
amorous rendezvous

are not fantasies I
perceive
the     reality
of you         is true

_,,,^.^,,,_
Florence

the_loner_23
Member Ascendant

since 2002-06-08

Posts 5479
Jacksonville, Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-06-16 12:00 PM

This is so romantic. *sighs*

Cold hands means a warm heart

JilGirl
Member

since 2003-05-24

Posts 364
Washington

3 posted 2003-06-17 07:07 AM

Whosever memory you're carrying
must have her ears ringing! WOW!

POWERFUL romance worded here!
I like the way you positioned
your pauses with spaces to ponder
the message!
Very fine, romantic write!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

4 posted 2008-02-07 09:28 AM

Very Romantic Write indeed

ARCTIC WIND

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