I Love The Way You Make Me Feel

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Open Poetry #27

I Love The Way You Make Me Feel

RedStoneEB
Senior Member

since 2003-06-08

Posts 772
uk

0 posted 2003-06-16 03:47 AM

I like the feel of your sweet tender lips
            Pressed against mine
          As we dance in the rain
           Under the moonlit sky

Angels fly by blessing us with love
       As we carry on kissing
        Till the morning sun

         Time stands still
    As we make sweet love
Joining are souls as we touch

Oh how I love the way you make me feel
          When the butterflies fly
                  It’s so unreal

Then comes the question we both waited for
     Will you be mine forever and more?
As the heavens above smiles down to the floor

Waiting for the answer to come from your lips
               Will it be the yes im wanting
             Or the no and just keep hoping

       I stand and wait as I begin to blush
          All the feelings getting struck
      I feel the warmth rush through my soul
As I stand and wait for your answer to be told

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2003-06-16 03:48 AM

oh Lee, wonderfully done! I hope you get the answer you want.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-06-16 05:52 AM

I find myself asking more and more...does she feel the same way I feel...or is it just me...this is preferable to just jumping in with both feet and dealing with the consequences later...James

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2003-06-16 09:28 AM

I certainly can see why you chose a beating heart for your icon!

What a romantic soul ye be!

Warm hugs,
EA

Edder
Senior Member

since 2003-04-02

Posts 671

4 posted 2003-06-17 05:09 AM

this is my favorite of yours...well done.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-02-07 09:26 AM

Enjoyed the thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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