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Honeybunch
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0 posted 2003-06-16 03:23 AM



There was no where else to go except into my soul
and in the closet all my clothes awaited my free choice
but how to choose the look, the feel, the way I ought to be,
to travel through the murky depths back up to being me.  

I chose the naked truth, laid aside my human guise,
and reveled in the freedom of no preconceived ideas,
to see reflected back at me designs of other times
and who I was and then was not repeated like dot nine.

In the dark through closed eyelids shadows stirred and moved
and I chose there the finest from the many past loves gone
to come again and swim with me through waters of the soul
into the present time where humans live and grow.

And so we loved soul to soul in the beauty of our dreams
where emotion naked and laid bare spoke a thousand words
but still we swim through water unable to stand proud
on land of planet earth and sand of my home ground.

I stand before the mirror uncertain, scared, afraid,
red or blue; how to choose the now best cover-up
to not violate a truth or cast aside a deep insight
brought to the surface from my unconscious mind.

It seems to me no candle burns but passion spotlights soul
and in the glow of all I know, I need no dress-up clothes!

© Copyright 2003 Helen - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2003-06-16 03:27 AM


awesome write! some good wisdom here
Honeybunch
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2 posted 2003-06-16 06:02 AM


Thank you, passing shadows.  (And shadows are a part of life like the air I breathe that helps me grow to adulthood in all that I believe.)
icebox
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in the shadows
3 posted 2003-06-16 11:07 AM


Dear Helen, This is inspiring!  Clothes can be shieldsor barriers,  and they can be costuming; as costuming they can be fun.  You are right that your soul does not need any artificial shielding.  The purity of who you are stands as the base of truth itself.  Thank you for sharing this with us.
Honeybunch
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4 posted 2003-06-16 11:11 AM


I'm deeply honoured that you read my words, Icebox.  You sum them up so well for me - thank you!
BluesSerenade
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since 2001-10-23
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By the Seaside
5 posted 2003-06-16 12:36 PM


You know how much I adore your writing don't you?  This is excellent Helen~ and I am so glad to see you posting here.

Hugs to you lady~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
6 posted 2003-06-16 01:14 PM


I wear my nakdthoughts, Helen.
That's all I need, most of the time.
hugs
Maureen

Honeybunch
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7 posted 2003-06-16 02:00 PM


Hello from me to the two of you!  I read but don't often comment - this working gal must watch the "pennies" (and that's all our money is worth these days).  Be well and thank you both for reading.
Martie
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8 posted 2003-06-16 07:37 PM


Hello Honeybunch

Much depth in what you have written...amazing and sure.  I think you are beautiful.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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9 posted 2003-06-16 07:40 PM


Honey:

standing naked before yourself
soul bared to you
scary venture
deeply insightful indeed
xxoo

Honeybunch
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10 posted 2003-06-17 12:17 PM


Martie - Thank you for reading and for such a gracious comment.  Beauty always can be seen in everything and everyone if we take the time to look for it.

Littlewing - Yes, definitely a scary adventure but sometimes so very necessary.  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment.

Artic Wind
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11 posted 2008-02-06 06:06 PM


Enjoyed your Write

ARCTIC WIND

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