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Earthly Serenade
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Earthly Serenade |
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Shimlu Junior Member
since 2003-02-16
Posts 11 |
Serenading mist from the deep blue Makes me feel alive today Looking deep into the blue Majestic underwater ruins Washed away from time Opening my eye, I seek answers Ruins, ancients...will guide me to what I seek Lifeless world, yet underneath it all.. Might we find a truth Within those doors Let the sand below your feet guide you To a paradise beyond the barriers or reality Reality will find no answers Guide your sight to an imagination Will you open the gates Please, now..serenade my senses Those crisp melonies enlightened me Follow the trail to insight Encircled light of truth We will survive |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
very interesting read i liked the poem my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
love the last line! packs a punch! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WOW! I like this world you kind of Created! With the misty stuff and everything! Very nice post indeed Enjoyed a lot!  ARCTIC WIND |
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