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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio 
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The bird erased in the rainwashed sky, I wander into flower fields climbing high along towering trees, trying to catch truths, if but in glimpses, only stumbling on my latest obsessions....... hearing dimestore poets speaking recycled news, I wait now for words of birds with realknown views no knock on fellow poets,(i love u all) just on my own impressionable self perhaps [This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (06-16-2003 07:13 AM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
smiling. Nothing wrong with dimestores--and nothing wrong with not liking 'em either. Tho I like to think this is more of a flea market--sometimes you just haveta dig around for the real finds--and sometimes too, (and I do mean ME) some idiot has buried a lovely antique beneath layers of paint!  You got me smiling as I think--and that is a good thing! Thanks.  |
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Cpat Hair
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
(chuckling) Dang it... been found out again..and I switched tags and everything! I just knew the fake I was would show one of these days.... Hey..seriously.. I think I undertand the feeling..I often and I mean OFTEN feel that way about the things I have written... perhaps a good many do... Now..dimestore... I have some nice memories of a dimestore.... and the treasures it held for the kid I was... |
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GhostWriter_6 Member
since 2001-09-03
Posts 237??Amityville?? |
nyce read.... i iwhs i had more feedback for ya ... but i really did enjoy this piece.... and your cute too... |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
grins great write |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
trying to catch truths, if but in glimpses, only stumbling on my latest obsessions....... here here!! Looking good over there girlielocks. |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
Hi ya Inked - I loved this one - You paint from a beautiful array of words creating a masterpiece on what was once blank canvas Paint on dear poet - I look forward to viewing more art . . . all that we see or seem is but a dream within a dream . . . |
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bklynboy Senior Member
since 2002-12-15
Posts 660florida |
Dimestore poets...arent we all. I mean there are so really good stuff posted and some not so good stuff. But we all try our best. As usual you stuff is pretty good. With all the posts, making up for lost time and opportunities? |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love it, even though I don't know exactly what you mean by "Dimestore poets", I just guess ... Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
I know what she means lol and lol @ K up there a flea market lmao definitely . . . Michele - this is a nice strong write and much needed thank you xxoo |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Even a five and dime poet can be Woolworthy  I like it! |
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chasing rain Senior Member
since 2001-05-15
Posts 737Canada |
"hearing dimestore poets speaking recycled news" Wow. That line...was probably the strongest line of the whole poem. This I understand wholly. Thank you for sharing! I hope to read more from you soon. -Leah |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
i guess i seek insight thru others at times, hanging on for the glimpses that arent truly anymore truths than the ones i can only faintly come up with......we cannot go beyond the sky,(well not all the time) therefore my friends, the birds, must bring me the truths....... something like that....... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I like this one! ARCTIC WIND |
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