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SupermanSkivvies
New Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 2

0 posted 2003-06-15 03:30 AM

His cold voice echoing through the night
searching, he calls out
the disoriented, forced into that gray forbidden mist
but no reply, no warmth to suffocate the eerie depths of fallen souls
reaching, towards the surface
they emerge into the deep, mesmerized by the efflorescense of darkness
with harrowing cries, one by one transcend into this foreboding land of meloncholy
"we will weep for no one", the thoughts race through his mind like spitting fire
but the tears show no mercy, running down his cheeks, heart beating rapidly
innocent lives warped, twisted with unmerciless
only paths of such pain can lead to this somber world.

tell me what ya think...

timothysangel1973

Senior Member

since 2001-12-03

Posts 1725
Never close enough

1 posted 2003-06-15 03:55 AM

only paths of such pain can lead to this somber world.

I love that line...
Great Write!

)))SMILES(((
Tima C.

If you cant get rid of the skeletons in your closet, you'd best teach them how to dance. George Bernard Shaw

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

2 posted 2003-06-15 04:50 AM

I love that line too!
Welcome to Passions!

[This message has been edited by passing shadows (06-15-2003 04:52 AM).]

SupermanSkivvies
New Member

since 2003-06-15

Posts 2

3 posted 2003-06-15 05:03 AM

hey thanks, i have like tons of songs and stuff that i need checked out by other people cuz i've been writing with my band for a while now. i'm lead singer and play guitar, i might be landing a record deal pretty soon so it'll be cool to get anyone's opinion, i'd really appreciate it!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

4 posted 2003-06-15 07:40 AM

I'll tell you what I think! I think...Welcome to Passions! You're going to like it here! Please, check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2003-06-15 08:43 AM

WELCOME!
Tell you what we think?
HAH, just try to stop us! Welcome to the land of word magic. You post'em, we read'em, we eat'em. Sometimes we swallow and sometimes we spit'em out.

Keep yer skivvies clean and have fun.

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-06-16 11:23 PM

(big hugggsssssssss) Yay! Oh my gosh, I love this gripping debut, dearest friend, you know, I sing and write my own lyrics and much of the music too and hope soon I can find a break of my own, I wish you so much wonderful gold on your endeavors, yay! Welcome to Passions, sweet friend, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely poetry, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet friend, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-02-06 06:00 PM

Welcome

ARCTIC WIND

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