Open Poetry #27 |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
I was not there through the years you call "hell", but I hold you in the pools of cold sweat that spill from clouds with no silver lining and fill the sleepless hours of night. I weep with you as you flee from demons whose faces haunt you in restless torment of past. I promise you that future will hold no reminder of days when happiness was not found behind painted fences and stucco walls. Walk with me into the sun and forget the worries of shadows left behind. Stand beside me on an alter of faith so that you may know the depth of the love I hold for you. Rest upon my vows and relinquish fear, for I shall defend you with wrath far beyond the fury of "hell". [This message has been edited by Edder (06-16-2003 01:55 AM).] |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
One word, rest! Perfect, Edder~ very good Sir~ |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
thank you kind lady ![]() |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
oh... ![]() |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Ah...yes, indeed you write a sanctuary of "a soft place to land..." Someone is VERY lucky to inspire such a write. ![]() |
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Cpat Hair![]()
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793 |
Very well said sir... an inspire and a vow that touches deep into the psyche... I enjoyed... I do not think you need that cup of muse..I think you have found your own..lol |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
sweet Dixie- thank you so much, but please, no tears. ![]() Karen- i have always been a passive sort, and am often surprised by my new found boldness. for some reason i take much greater offense when someone i love is wronged. Capt.- a compliment indeed coming from a talent such as you. "dumb old country boy"? i think not. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice and lucky lady ...h |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's a very emotional piece to me Ed...not really sad tears, just emotional tears...good touching write |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Don't think I've read you before Edder, enjoyed this a lot! Quite a promise, quite a poem... ![]() |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
![]() If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Edder Senior Member
since 2003-04-02
Posts 671 |
Helen- what a joy it is to have you read me! Dixie- well, as long as that's the case. ![]() Duncan- it's a pleasure to have you here, sir. come back as often as you like. ![]() Kristen- this could have easily been written for you. it took me almost 26 years to find the one who inspired it, so don't give up and accept no substitutes. true love is hard to come by, but it's well worth the wait. [This message has been edited by Edder (06-23-2003 05:29 PM).] |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
'tis |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
I agree with dixie, its a very emotional write, because this is every woman's dream, well...every woman who has lived through 'hell'... wonderful write |
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David Carrson Junior Member
since 2003-06-23
Posts 25Carrickfergus N. Ireland |
someone is very much loved me thinks!!!!!! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Where were you when I needed someone just like you? Someone to protect me from the big, bad meanie? If the need ever arises again, would you protect me and my honor? I trust the one who is the inspiration for such a gallant write, is an understanding and compassionate woman... Enjoyed this write, Ed, very much! ![]() Luvs 'n hugs, Linda |
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suthern![]() ![]()
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
As someone with more than a passing acquaintance with years called hell... I can only hope she grasps this promise... for then she'll start to live the rest of her life instead of the past. Excellent write of caring! *S* |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beauty ![]() ARCTIC WIND |
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