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icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

0 posted 2003-06-25 12:29 PM

All right,
where was I at?
Oh yes, this bit of fluff.
It's just a piece of self;
well, where in hell
did it come from?
What could it be made of?
Not good grammar
that's for sure!
It has no definition,
no form
no shape
no stuff,
just fragmented remnant,
just a bit of fluff.
It must have had some use
or other
like a father
mother
sister
brother.
C'mon now Bucko
what in hell is wrong?
Something's missing,
this constant whistling
hissing in my brain
will drive me nuts.
I just misplaced its meaning;
I'm rid of thought
I haven't bought
erasers now for years.
I'm out of drink.
I'm out of ink.
I'm even out of tears.
The lost,
the cost,
the frost....
Oh damn!
My roaches all are wet.
I'm down to Camels,
Turkish brambles,
what a cigarette.

©2003 by icebox

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

1 posted 2003-06-25 12:33 PM

"Oh yes, this bit of fluff.
It's just a piece of self;"

....just another poet, with his soul in a plain brown folder....and crazy or not, I like the way you think.

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Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

2 posted 2003-06-25 12:42 PM

LOVED this! Especially the end.

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

3 posted 2003-06-25 12:59 PM

oh, how I enjoyed this!!!

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

4 posted 2003-06-25 01:02 AM

Wanna cup of chamomile tea?

you ramble a nice bramble tale

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2003-06-25 01:05 AM

oh I like your style !

Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Bonfirelight
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 85
London, England

6 posted 2003-06-25 03:52 AM

Excellent. Again. Especially the ending.
good work iceman

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

7 posted 2003-06-25 03:53 AM

very cool thoughts

Nan

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since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

8 posted 2003-06-25 06:20 AM

Perhaps this fluff
Is just
A touch of you
To share your stuff
I must
Thank you...

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2003-06-25 07:44 AM

I'm rid of thought
"I haven't bought
erasers now for years.
I'm out of drink.
I'm out of ink.
I'm even out of tears.
The lost,
the cost,
the frost....
Oh damn!"

you write so incredibly...h

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

10 posted 2003-06-25 10:23 AM

icebox

Wherever it is, it has substance and heart.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2003-06-25 10:27 AM

Yeppers, just lettin' the words fall free from your interesting mind and down the page! Loved it!

Luvin' hugs,
EA

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

12 posted 2003-06-25 10:29 AM

a fine line between genius in madness though you my friend walk the former

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

13 posted 2009-03-23 02:53 PM

Thoughts painted from your poets brush! ~ wonderful

ARCTIC WIND

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