.....some kind of poet......

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SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

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with you

0 posted 2003-06-25 03:00 AM

What if my words
fell out of time
didn’t make sense
didn’t rhyme

what if my feelings
weren’t conveyed
what if my heart
wasn’t displayed

what if my sorrow
lacked memory’s ache
didn’t touch lonely
didn’t know heartbreak

what if my love
held no romance
no picked daisies
no kisses, in dance

what if my skies
didn’t offer soft rain
didn’t hold grey cloud
no drip drop refrain

what if my moon
didn’t round full
didn’t illuminate
had no inner pull

what if my ocean
refused to be blue
wasn’t deep
or a reminder, of you

what if my quill
could no longer flow it
would you still call me
some kind poet?

~SEA~

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
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1 posted 2003-06-25 03:06 AM

more today than yesterday but not as much as tomorrow,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

2 posted 2003-06-25 03:40 AM

damn! Glenn stole my reply

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2003-06-25 06:33 AM

This reminds me of that 21 questions song where he ask his girl if she would still love him if he rode the bus...James

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

4 posted 2003-06-25 07:16 AM

The answer is yes, SEA. You would indeed find some beauty of which to write...because that is you. I love your work...softness of flow, wonderful images. I learn much from you.

Hugs to you,
Patricia

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

5 posted 2003-06-25 07:27 AM

A kind poet, some kind of poet...
and a very dear friend...

SEA...where did this come from?

It is beautiful!

It is also libraried!!!

LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

6 posted 2003-06-25 07:29 AM

absolutely....now, write another beauty...loved the picture, as well.

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

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7 posted 2003-06-25 07:46 AM

I agree...the answer is yes!
Beautiful.
Eric

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

8 posted 2003-06-25 08:32 AM

Susan~You'll always always be a very special poet!
Beautiful words..simply beautiful.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
you haven't been listening.~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

9 posted 2003-06-25 08:58 AM

SEA, a POET ye shall always be...

~ As the sea flows with the tides of life, so may your pen forevermore...

Lovin' hugs,
EA

Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

10 posted 2003-06-25 08:58 AM

realy great write. i love the flow and ryme.

Thank you for the words.

Goldenrose.

Paula Finn
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missouri

11 posted 2003-06-25 09:14 AM

By your very being you ARE a poet...this is lovely

Larry C

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since 2001-09-10

Posts 10286
United States

12 posted 2003-06-25 09:46 AM

That was a rhetorical question, right? Because ya' know the answer. Maybe you just need to hear it more often. Yes sir that's my baby(poet)!. Love it I do.

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

Cpat Hair

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since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

13 posted 2003-06-25 10:12 AM

what if my quill
could no longer flow it
would you still call me
some kind poet?

Nope... wouldn't call you some kind poet at all....

might call you a poetess of life and love
or a poet of tender or a tender poet...
but I'd always call you friend and beautiful....

hugs my friend...

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

14 posted 2003-06-25 11:12 AM

what if my moon
didn’t round full
didn’t illuminate
had no inner pull

what if my ocean
refused to be blue
wasn’t deep
or a reminder, of you

what if my quill
could no longer flow it
would you still call me
some kind poet?
===========================

OH MAN!!!!!!!!!

IWISHIHADWROTETHIS!!!!!!!

YOU KNOW I am loving every poetically perfect word of this jewel of muse and pen.

what if my ocean
refused to be blue
wasn’t deep
or a reminder, of you

OH SIGH!!!

this one is mine..Im taking it.

All I can feel is this distance between you and me.
I can say I love you but I can't make you believe me
because touching is believing.

c.j.

Susan Caldwell
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since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

15 posted 2003-06-25 11:29 AM

Oh this is good...

Susan

garysgirl

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since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

16 posted 2003-06-25 11:37 AM

Susan, I love this rhyme...I love the font and color....I love the words....I love the thoughts....

Hey, you know I love this whole poem (as always with your poetry).
It is beautiful, dear poetess Lady

Hugs to you

Ethel

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural

17 posted 2009-03-23 03:04 PM

I don't know, keep on rhyming poet friend! ~ Enjoyed these conveyed thoughts

ARCTIC WIND

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