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Janette
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0 posted 2003-08-01 07:24 PM


behind closed doors

behind closed doors
awaits a private retreat
for articulate lovers

offering their lyrics
hours of melodic passion
to seek complex sounds

humming slowly
a low-key duet begins
combining voices in song

hands reach for high notes
arranging artistic movements
in contrasting forms

singing in rhyming accord
the fexible pattern
prescribes the body scheme

with allegro pace
the music continues
at a brisk lively tempo

the motion peaks
in deep gradual crescendo
down the flowing passage

increasing in volume
the fine-tuned performance
adjusts in sharp measure

following the mark of finis
all is repeated
seeking the end once more

as the sonnet plays on

Janette


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Bill Charles
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1 posted 2003-08-01 07:28 PM


Janette - a most interesting write.  And most interesting closed doors...

BC



Janette
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2 posted 2003-08-01 07:41 PM


Thanks Bill.
Local Rebel
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3 posted 2003-08-02 12:45 PM


a resonant tone!

I could hear you all the way out here
in the hall

Janette
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4 posted 2003-08-02 09:25 AM


Local Rebel ... Hahahhahah  ... good one!
Thanks for the read.

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5 posted 2003-08-02 10:46 AM


Every one wants to know what is behind the door. You gave us an insight. Maggie
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6 posted 2003-08-02 10:57 AM


Multiple pleasures....and the beat goes on!

Lovely words...lovely as can be!

SharaRose @-->--

Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer!

Janette
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7 posted 2003-08-02 11:11 AM


cusick - shhhhhhhhhhh it's a secret Hahahaha!  Thank you for responding.

SharaRose - glad you heard it, too.  Thanks for the read.

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8 posted 2003-08-02 02:23 PM


enjoyed
Janette
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9 posted 2003-08-02 05:29 PM


vandana - thank you for stopping by and replying to me.
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10 posted 2003-08-02 05:54 PM


the motion peaks
in deep gradual crescendo
down the flowing passage

hmm, crescendo power
enjoyed the visuals this one presented

JamesMichael
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11 posted 2003-08-02 06:15 PM


Green door, whats that secret you're keepin'?
James

Janette
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12 posted 2003-08-02 06:28 PM


Midnitesun - It pleases me that you ... saw ... the visuals.  Thanks so much for letting me know. *grins*

James - Hahaha!  You are cracking me up here dear man and I am loving it, too.  Come closer and I shall whisper the secret in your ear.  Thanks for the read.

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