Open Poetry #27 |
Bridge of Broken Trust |
Bonnie j Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588Ohio |
Bridge of Broken Trust In the beginning a bridge built on strong ties of love will capture the qualities of friendship, compassion, patience and the all encompassing tie of trust. As long as trust remains, nothing will drown the faith of love in the turbulent waters of life. A bridge with a solid foundation, with cured beams of seasoned wood, will weather the storms that will cross your path leading to your life's destiny. The storm of illness, death in families, your income lost and even your faith may be put in peril of destruction. So many trials in a lifetime. If your bridge of love is built on a strong foundation it will last. But! A bridge made on a mound of sand will crumble and fall. Words holding no truth, saying one thing, but doing another. Saying, “I Love You,” then going to another who is hidden in the shadows of deceit. Like a bridge, a cord of wood starting to rot, so does mistrust grow. As you go through life be careful of what you choose and build your bridge of unbroken trust and everlasting love. Bonnie J. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Words of wisdom... now how many heard them? -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You have built a bridge for your readers to cross... EA |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
As you go through life be careful of what you choose and build your bridge of unbroken trust and everlasting love. There is so much truth in this poem, Bonnie. I really enjoyed reading it. Hey, did you noticed that I put feedback on your poem at the other site? That is where my Homepage is. You can put it here on your profile page and it will show as the little house at the top of your post. That way more people will see your poetry there. Just thought I'd let you know, in cas you didn't know. Hugs Ethel |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I loved as never before...and that love still embraces me...but I could never love him like that again...as the last action, was and always will be my last memory...trust broken can never be repaired. |
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