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KristieSue
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0 posted 2003-08-01 10:51 AM


"I AM"

I am a caring person who is just a bit lonely
I wonder if my "Mr Right" will ever come along
I hear the sound of my children laughing
I see who I am in ten years
I want a companion and forever love
I am a caring person who is just a bit lonely

I pretend that I am just as happy single
I feel secure in the knowledge of my future
I touch the pillow beside my head in hope
I worry that I will always be lonely
I cry in fear of just being me, myself, and I
I am a caring person who is just a bit lonely

I understand that one should be happy with herself
I say my life is where I want it to be
I dream of adding another to complete my life
I try to live my life day by day
I hope my dreams come reality one day soon
I am a caring person who is just a bit lonely


*hhmmm....I didn't know whether to write this as a poem, so I just filled in the blanks :-)

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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1 posted 2003-08-01 10:53 AM



Kristie...it looks and feels
like a challenge well met.

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2 posted 2003-08-01 10:54 AM


KristieSue, thanks for letting us know who you are.
I love this challenge.
Hugs  
Ethel

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3 posted 2003-08-01 10:55 AM


Nicely done.

Susan C.

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4 posted 2003-08-01 10:58 AM


+*+*+

Kristie Sue,
I like you!
And may your dreams,
All come true!

+*+*+




EA

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5 posted 2003-08-01 11:03 AM


awww ty you guys!  I feel the need to do this again just so everyone doesn't think I'm a desperate fool! LOL

HUGGLES you guys and thanks!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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