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Poe_Pot_Pie
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since 2003-06-01
Posts 107
Canada

0 posted 2003-07-31 09:15 PM


You save me daily,
You are my hero.

Without you, I would stay in bed.
Without you, my day would drag on.
Without you, the headaches never stop.

The best hero of all,
You are:

Coffee.

Your smell, your feel and your taste is addicting.
So, to you, my hero, I am addicted.


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Kahlil
Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

1 posted 2003-07-31 09:22 PM


Woe is Poe without the Joe....
hee hee ~K~

Kahlil
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since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881

2 posted 2003-08-01 12:47 PM


I'm surprised that no one from Seattle has responded to this coffee addiction write, so I'm bumping you back up.
angelblueyes
Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148
Oklahoma
3 posted 2003-08-01 01:12 AM


I enjoyed this.AlthoughI haven't found a way yet that I like coffee...lol
angelblueyes

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
4 posted 2003-08-01 01:13 AM


haha that was cool...coffee as a hero how nifty

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

x8x_bigmike
Member
since 2003-07-08
Posts 130
California, USA
5 posted 2003-08-01 01:49 AM


You save me daily,
You are my hero.

Without you, I would stay in bed.
Without you, my day would drag on.
Without you, the headaches never stop.

The best hero of all,
You are:

Coffee.

Your smell, your feel and your taste is addicting.
So, to you, my hero, I am addicted.
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very nice...ever thought of shortening it up...maybe
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Save me daily,
my hero.

Without you,
in bed,
my day would drag
headaches
The best,
Coffee taste:
I am  hero addicted.
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Just some thoughts...great stuff...inspired me to want to play around with it...

Mike

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my email is bigmike@peakpool.com
, feel free to write

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