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Open Poetry #27

The loving man in me

B3jamboree
Junior Member

since 2003-06-26

Posts 33
Michigan

0 posted 2003-07-31 11:46 PM

She never was much for vanity
I had liked her for that reason
I thought she had an air of enlightenment
And an air of insanity
Put on on my behalf

And she really knew how to just laugh
We were both idealistic
I don't know about her but I still am so
I wrote the poems and she did the math
She'd multiply and add

Kisses and whispers. I had it bad
And it just got worse and worse
Of the ones I miss the most she is first
But I didn't know what I had
So I just let it go

Now I guess I just don't even know
I don't know id I'll find out
If I ever find a love like that again
I'll have little reason to doubt
The loving man in me

angelblueyes
Member Elite

since 2003-07-19

Posts 2148
Oklahoma

1 posted 2003-07-31 11:49 PM

Don't doubt the loving man in you, for I know it's there just maybe a little gaurded. Maybe I should drag it out of you...hehehehe Angels on spirited wings will bring you the love you deserve and let you see that you are the loving man.Well done here.

angelblueyes

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2003-08-01 11:05 AM

...And she really knew how to just laugh

~*~

Boy, did you make this old gal smile...

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

3 posted 2003-08-01 11:17 AM

"And an air of insanity"

If that is what guys are attracted to..I should have them knocking my door down....

Very nice write.

Susan C.

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

4 posted 2003-08-01 12:37 PM

Bravo!
What an introspective and optimistic write...I really liked the glow of this.
TD

Kahlil
Senior Member

since 2003-04-12

Posts 1881

5 posted 2003-08-01 12:41 PM

This lesson you have learned has built on the strengths of the loving man you already are. Great, honest, touching write. ~K~

[This message has been edited by Kahlil (08-01-2003 12:42 PM).]

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