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Moonlit Hour
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Moonlit Hour |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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Moonlit Hour Sunset has long taken place over these hills The stillness provided a softly kind of insane Sleep couldn't come easy when the only thing resting Were the moonbeams on my window pane... Subtle light and delicate memories gathered strength Irrupted the sweetness of sundown's power Reality presented itself when I just wasn't ready And, I sighed in the name of sorrow one moonlit hour... Surely grace would interrupt at any given moment I thought As I was a little lifeless staring behind these eyes There, in the arms of nighttime's mighty hold All good feelings, once again, passed me by... Uncertainty slipped through right along with the rays I had no where to run but inside my mind One moonlit hour never felt so long before Lying face to face with you there the whole time... Darkness invited both the past and the present Nature trespassed over what calm should be Oh, I grieved, I did, within a moonlit hour Leaving no room for pleasant to breathe... It was a call to the unexpected in a quiet stare And, a tear stained pillow as my witness I was there In a single moonlit hour I touched all that I own In a lasting impression of sadness I just roamed... Sauni Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Saunni, this was such a hauntingly sad write, but oh so powerful! so nice to read you again. drop me an e-mail if you have time. take care amy  "love is like a butterfly-- |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Oh my...this is so lovely! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~The breeze that kissed you on the face, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
It was a call to the unexpected in a quiet stare And, a tear stained pillow as my witness I was there In a single moonlit hour I touched all that I own In a lasting impression of sadness I just roamed... Darlin...I'm sending you many hugs, big strong hugs...as hard as practically possible. You are loved, deeply and endlessly, and your heart is vast...opened to life...and love....you are most intensely aware...and the proud of spiritual embrace your entire being. Love...Lee J. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sauni, Lovely is as lovely writes.Enjoyed. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Aimster, thanks for reading this. It was nice to hear from you again! Enchantress, thank you kindly for reading what I wrote. I appreciate it! LeeJ, thank you for your words from the heart. Means more then I can say! Seymour Tabin, thanks so much for taking the time to read this. Always a pleasure hearing from you! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
May the moon kiss your tear-stained cheeks and the morning sun soak up your tears... Loving, healing hugs, Linda |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Beautiful writing...James |
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SharaRose Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2501Somewhere out there~ |
 Of sound, and speech let all lift the hearer! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
always so profound and powerful, sad writing from you Saunni I love these days of your writings |
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angelblueyes Member Elite
since 2003-07-19
Posts 2148Oklahoma |
SO sad and full of deep emotion here Know that you will soon have all that your heart and soul desires.For a beautiful one like your's deserves much happiness and warmth.angelblueyes |
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