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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA 
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Retrace the petals to there where you discarded my taste like delicacy unappreciated Step into rhythm reasoning why did I let you back for another season Most clicks of heel youre there, loose on my lip I should roam barefoot so I don't notice youre not walking my way anymore More so inside prison of skull bone warden causes you to do time in my defence Whos sentence is this? If I may quote you I will say I have no desire to lose you again Wait, no, not you son she was talking to her mind Do you have me in mind? well cross me out . Instant karma's gonna get you. |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I l*ved this Gem..it was positively brilliant  Well cross me out (wow..) insanity is not a crime |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
dusted......He's Out! As always Gem, good poem and great expression... |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
If I may quote you I will say I have no desire to lose you again Wait, no, not you son she was talking to her mind Do you have me in mind? well cross me out Tell him, Gemmagirl!!  Just erase him like he's never been!!  (Pssstt!! I know it's easier said than done) Hugs to you, sweet friend  Ethel Mae |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Step into rhythm reasoning why did I let you back for another season Most clicks of heel youre there, loose on my lip I should roam barefoot so I don't notice youre not walking my way anymore ============================= have I told you I love the way your mind works Ramble on girlie gem ... its pure poetry.  "How could I stand here with you and not be moved by you." |
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skyshine
since 2002-02-07
Posts 3058Beneath the northern stars |
He's outta there....great work Gem!  ~Elizabeth Dreams last for so long, even after you're gone... |
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El_Campeador Senior Member
since 2003-01-29
Posts 761Ohio, USA |
Well, you may be crossed out of his mind, but with this poem you are deeply back in ours... Great write, Gemma. “We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
That's my Gem, abuse him like you abuse me!! grins you go girl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I can picture you clicking your heels! lol I should try that one! It's better than crying to get their attention and have them do your bidding! lol  Linda |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Most clicks of heel youre there, loose on my lip I should roam barefoot so I don't notice youre not walking my way anymore More so inside prison of skull bone warden causes you to do time in my defence Whos sentence is this?" Awesome, Gem! You're in my head, can I borrow your ruby slippers sometime? |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
Very fresh imagery and metaphors, Gemma -- I like your style. -MVS You CAN make a difference: |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
poof.........he's gone........ wish it were so easy sometimes just keeep writing him out; they do make for good poetry thought, some of my best inspiration comes from them, where o where do they come from? |
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