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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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humanity the casualty of its atom split ambition mushroom clouds and charred bone fields instinct lays smouldering beneath these blistered shells what does it take to break the choke of avarice |
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Kahlil Senior Member
since 2003-04-12
Posts 1881 |
Aenimal: this is your best write ever, in my opinion. It's completely uninhibited. And so, here we all are, after all. Man, I dig your new picture, too. You're off to the moon! ~K~ |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
I salute you on this write, Sir! It will take, of course, the acceptance that fulfillment flows only from within. |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
wow Thank you Kahlil way too kind ice thanks, what a wonderful world.. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
I dig the picture, too, and the write. It is definately ONE of your best, in a sea of others you've written.  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
ahhhh testing my Latin tonight you are End of a kingdom through greed, wealth and power . . . and so much more in your words always so much more than what is seen this reminded me of things to come and yes, it is superbly written Raph as they always are amazing xxoo |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
you all have me blushing yer all insane i think the pic is horrid but thanks Kaoru thanks I really appreciate the support and l*ve your words Sue thanks the poem was inspired by one of PIP's greatest bsquirrel /pip/Forum55/HTML/000539.html |
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Skyfire
since 2000-12-27
Posts 3381Riding |
hmmm... ponderful... *walks away and ponders*  |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
has Mikey seen this? he will love it . . . yw |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
read this, read squirrel's awesome stuff! |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
thanks skyfire don't ponder too much it melts thebrain..at least thats my excuse Sue are you kidding, you know how in awe of him i am i'd be embarassed. I still can't call him by his name even though i feel like an idiot calling him bsqr or squirrel.. Thanks Dix yeah wish he would post more and at least one or two in open so people could see his work |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
OMG - show it to him, he will be quite impressed, if you dont, I will so there! |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
he doesn't bite...im still in awe of him too...  but we were on a first name basis for awhile he even said he liked my poetry..so why wouldn't he like yours!? and dawg my words lack their luster compared to yours!If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Your mind is amazing! Can I borrow it for awhile?  Awesome. Chris |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You outdid yourself with this one, Dear Raphael!  Greed kills!  |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
This truely is my favorite one of yours. Makes me think of what we are capable of destroying. on brattier note: heh...have you brushed your hair in the last centry, or do you have dreadlocks?  sorry, temptaion wins insanity is not a crime |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue nope on both counts lol thanks kris Chris i wouldn't wish that on you it's not a good thing trust me Thanks Linda Liz, Brush what is that? No not dreads but i've got hellacurly hair |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Raph, you are way too good for words. Funny how I am supposed to be a poet and yet I am unable to express how this poem makes me feel. Just know that everything about this is brilliant - the title, the message...DAMN! This is a keeper and I agree it is one of your best!  I hope to one day write with as much sensitivity, depth and intelligence as you do.....you really are an inspiration and you make me jealous dammit! heheheMelissa Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world! |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
lol..you actualy inspired me..now whats up with THAT?  you know i l*ve ya..otherwise i wouldn't give you such a hard time  phhltt. put yourself in Riley or Duncan's shoes. they really get it hard  I'm trying ever so hard to be good...insanity is not a crime |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
sometimes the fishies just cant swim fast enough from the big bad humans, can we fellow fish? the picture spooks me, im afraid to open this up each time |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thanks Manager means alot to me always boosting me thanks Thanks Liz it's all good I take alot of abuse from you guys as it is im used to it..phblttttttt Mish how do you think i feel looking in the mirror..see im gonna pull the damn thing soon |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
no silly, just want to see all of the darkone |
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