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Open Poetry #27

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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-07-31 11:28 AM

that easily
two tears
make their entrance

their journey
an evaporation
of hope

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-31 11:57 AM

brilliant

short but has a lot of impact.

insanity is not a crime

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

2 posted 2003-07-31 12:05 PM

Sometimes, the fewer the words, the more potent the impact on the reader...this one had that effect on me...well done, and appreciated here! ~S~

Accept these small gifts from my gypsy heart ~~S~~

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

3 posted 2003-07-31 01:22 PM

Maureen...I agree with those above. I think the few words fit the subject, clearly seen.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

4 posted 2003-07-31 08:39 PM

Thank you all. It appears I wasn't having a very good day

hugss
M

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